Elevator Pitch No.3

A reflection on the feedback you received from your last pitch.

I received good feedback on my last pitch mostly because of the pictures I included of my dog Stella. They liked how I played on the emotional appeal of the viewer. In this pitch, I included my actual dog into the pitch and I expect the same appeal.

What did you change, based on the feedback?

Instead of just using pictures, I included my actual dog and the pictures. I used the same data from the ASPCA as well as the narrowed target of my business plan (18-25-year-old first-time owners). I hope this pitch will appeal to my audience as my last pitch seemed to do.